Tuesday, January 26, 2010

A Discourse Community

A discourse community is a group of people that share same values and goals; this is possible through their similar forms of communication. Their communication process can be written and spoken; in addition, these communities have a terminology that identifies them. In my case, I am a member of the Law School Preparation Institute (LSPI) and members of that community share common goals.
Members of the Law School Preparation Institute have the same objective; our objective is to learn more about law and most of us are aspiring lawyers. To learn the law we have to read cases, analyze the facts, identify the issue, make reasoning, and give a conclusion. Sometimes we have mock trials and we get the opportunity to be a judge and the defendant’s or victim’s attorney. As a judge it is your duty to conduct the session in a formal manner, provide reasoning, and finally give a conclusion. If you are an attorney it is your duty to defend your party using valid arguments gathered from the cases you read. In occasions, our tutors gave us lessons in how to write like lawyers and the importance of applying dovetails to make legal papers more clear and specific.
The Law School Preparation Institute is a discourse community because we communicate by speaking and writing. In addition, we share common values like working hard to accomplish our goals. In this case, I and my peers share a passion for the law and someday we will practice the law.
“On Becoming a Writer” a small story by Russell Baker in which he explains his attitude towards writing. At first he was motivated but he thought that it was something beyond his reach but he enjoyed it like nothing else. He was discouraged by his professor because he had to follow a certain format; at one point of his journey he detested writing. One day he did free writing for one of his assignments and his teacher was impressed with the quality of the paper. Russell Baker was discouraged but he persevered especially when he noticed that cheese people like his professor liked his writing. Mr. Baker and I have similar experiences while pursuing our desired career, but, in my case it is the law.
When I was a sophomore in High School one of my teachers told me that I should be an engineer because lawyers need to speak English perfectly. Since my arrival from Mexico was recent my English was weak at that time. My teacher basically told me that learning proper English was something impossible for me because I was too old. His words ignited a curiosity, so I decided to go to the court house to confirm that lawyers are perfect speakers just like he claims. My professor was partially correct because indeed lawyers are excellent public speakers but that doesn’t mean that I can’t do it. That same day I introduced myself to several lawyers and a judge, to keep a conversation I told them about my dreams and that I was passionate about the law. One lawyer was thoroughly impressed with my courage and he offered me an internship during the summer eventually he hired me and I have been working for him for the last 2 years. During that time frame I have learned more vocabulary and his advice is valuable for law school and for real life situations.
My story and Mr. Baker’s story are parallel because both of us persevered. Ironically for both of us the persons that almost spoiled our dreams were the ones that generated and motivated us to continue with our goals. Mr. Baker is a successful writer and I will be a successful a lawyer; regardless of what people say or force me to do because now I am aware that what might see your destruction is in reality your salvation.

Monday, January 25, 2010

Top Ten Community Issues

1.) Voting Rates- About ten percent of the people in El Paso are registered to vote, people must exercise their right to vote. It is their opportunity to elect someone they support.
2.) Corruption- Recently I have read articles involving corrupt judges from this county; this is not fair for all citizens.
3.) Immigration- The wall is an embarrassment for Mexicans because most of us come here to the United States looking for a better work.
4.) Nonprofit Organizations- It is the third largest employer of El Paso and some Elected Officials are looking forward in making cuts. These organizations are there to help people in need.
5.) Taxes- As an economist I would like to find a model that could lower taxes for the upper class to encourage the inauguration of more businesses. But, I would also like to find a way to maintain some of those nonprofit organizations.
6.) Violence in Juarez- Affects trading with the United States and also the people that reside there live with constant fear and I have family in Juarez.
7.) Drugs and weapons trafficking- This is the largest port for drug and weapon trafficking in the United States. El Paso has been a peaceful place but we are at risk of becoming a violent community.
8.) Unemployment- In order for us to be successful as a country and as a community we need to fix the unemployment statistics.
9.) Education- As a former student of El Paso Independent School District I consider that the level of difficulty for the TAKS is very low and I think it should be higher to encourage competition.
10.) Teen Pregnancy- It shouldn’t be happening because young women usually go on welfare and government cannot be spending too much money on them.

Wednesday, January 20, 2010

My Information

My name is Marco Antonio Favela I was born in Juarez, Mexico. I am 18 years old and I am attending the University of Texas at El Paso I would like attend Law School after I earn a Bachelors in Finance and Economics. My goal is to be a Corporate Lawyer and I would like to practice Criminal Law as a hobby. The purpose of this blog is to improve my writing and analytical skills to eventually become a better speaker to present my ideas more clearly too any audience. This blog is a product of my English 1311 class and I look forward in learning new things through this class.